This post shows my improvement on developing paragraphs. I was able to make it flow much smoother and explain my quotations and why I chose them.
This homework helps show my organization skills as I take some the pieces in this homework and move into a fully formed paper that flows.
This helps establish my improvement on signal phrasing in a a complete homework assignment. I show the worse signal phrases at the beginning and then the improvements at the end.
This helps establish my reading comprehension and annotating skills. I clearly use relation and understanding to clearly grasp what the author is saying.