Recursive Process

I knew I needed to add more to my Significant writing project because I was short on words. I noticed that the most significant changes made in my work were within Barclay’s formula paragraphs, which was good but my introduction was lacking a little bit. By seeing that I needed to add a little to my introduction, I started looking at what is necessary in one. I realized through this process I didn’t show who’s articles I would be working with throughout the paper. This was the first step i took to furthering my paper. I added each source and described them briefly and why they would create a more meaningful paper that helps show who I agree with.