Para. 4 of Final Draft

At first, writing about my own thoughts was unnatural. I could see the improvements within myself really being able to position myself in a text and allowing my ideas to flow freely. This really was noticeable in my second major paper this semester. In para. 4, your really able to see where I stand on the integrated curriculum. I was able to establish why I believe it is the best curriculum and why I think it helps students of all majors. This was the first place where I could truly see improvement on my stands.